I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Good picture Taylor - perhaps next time you could find a way to rotate the picture rather than telling your readers to tilt their screens. You might remember from our video call today when I showed you the slide from the Reading Hurumanu page that said your blog post must include: - The name and author of your chosen text - Title - Introduction - DLO - Reflection - Sources - Question I'm happy to accept your picture as a DLO, but I would really like you to also provide the other points as well. I look forward to seeing your work when it's complete. - Mr Mitchell
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Good picture Taylor - perhaps next time you could find a way to rotate the picture rather than telling your readers to tilt their screens.
ReplyDeleteYou might remember from our video call today when I showed you the slide from the Reading Hurumanu page that said your blog post must include:
- The name and author of your chosen text
- Title
- Introduction
- DLO
- Reflection
- Sources
- Question
I'm happy to accept your picture as a DLO, but I would really like you to also provide the other points as well.
I look forward to seeing your work when it's complete.
- Mr Mitchell
Thank you mr but my mum used her phone and send it to me by gmail and she had to fit it in.
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